Script Feedback Conversation

Bold Type Coaching

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One 60-minute private conversation about your TV or feature script. During our time, we'll discuss "Glows and Grows" aligned with your priorities and intentions. Together, we’ll probe deeper into your protagonist's internal and external wants, their arc from the first to the last page, structural beats, tone, theme,  For TV pilots, we'll also discuss how your pilot launches your show idea and engine.  In addition to a recording of our conversation, you'll receive written feedback and a plan for the next draft, including prompts to help you further develop your story. 

Testimonials

I’ve come to rely on Laura to help me fulfill my potential as a writer. She offers so much wisdom and knowledge based on her own experience as a writer, winner of prestigious competitions, information gleaned from labs and retreats she’s participated in, courses she’s taken and books she’s read. Her insights have helped me take my scripts from just okay to great, and it’s comforting to have feedback I can trust. Plus she’s so enthusiastic, kind and, of course, hilarious. Writing is a solitary endeavor and it’s tremendously helpful to know there’s someone in my corner. I’m so grateful I found Laura!

- Abby Cohen, TV Comedy Writer

"I highly recommend working with Laura. I felt like I was talking to a super knowledgeable friend who really wanted to see my work come to life. Laura had the best questions that made me think about ways to flesh out my characters and develop storylines. Laura gave me notes on two different scripts. I walked away feeling like I had good ideas that were worth developing. I also felt excited about working on my scripts in a way I hadn't felt when re-writing on my own. I am signing up for more!"

- Kendra Cunningham, Stand-Up Comedian & TV Comedy Writer

"Laura is the screenwriting coach I've been waiting for! Her feedback helped me find direction in a fresh concept and provided me with guiding questions to use as the next steps in developing my character. Her positivity, supportiveness, and vast experience in the comedy world were exactly what I needed!"

- Sarah White, Half-Hour TV Writer

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Price

$275
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By booking this package, you agree to these Terms and Conditions

This package includes

  • One 60-minute Zoom conversation
  • Cloud recording of our conversation
  • Written feedback
  • Two close reads of your TV and feature script in preparation of our session
  • This session expires two months from the date of purchase
  • This is a non-refundable investment