This service is designed for writers who want thoughtful, developmental feedback on their scenes — without turning the process into line editing or technical correction.
Scene Feedback focuses on how your scenes are working as story, not how your sentences are styled.
This is for you if:
- You want reassurance that your scenes are doing the right narrative work
- You’re unsure whether a scene is carrying enough emotional weight or momentum
- You want help clarifying what belongs in a scene — and what doesn’t
- You’d like a second set of eyes before moving forward
- You want feedback that supports your voice rather than reshaping it
What You’ll Receive:
For each Waypoint (or group of scenes), I will provide consolidated written feedback addressing:
- Structural alignment with your Waypoints
- Emotional clarity and resonance
- Scene purpose and narrative momentum
- Where a scene might be carrying too much or too little
- What to deepen later and what to leave alone for now
This feedback is designed to help you move forward with confidence — not perfection.
How It Works:
You submit your scenes for a single Waypoint (or up to two Waypoints for monthly support), and I return written feedback within the stated turnaround time.
Options:
Per Waypoint:
$75 USD
$75 USD
Monthly Support (up to two Waypoints):
$135 USD/month
$135 USD/month
Price
$75
This package includes
What You’ll Receive:
For each Waypoint (or group of scenes), I will provide consolidated written feedback addressing:
- Structural alignment with your Waypoints
- Emotional clarity and resonance
- Scene purpose and narrative momentum
- Where a scene might be carrying too much or too little
- What to deepen later and what to leave alone for now
This feedback is designed to help you move forward with confidence — not perfection.
What This Is Not:
Scene Feedback does not include:
- Line editing
- Copyediting
- Grammar or proofreading
- Rewriting your work
Those belong in later phases of revision and refinement.