A Private First Draft Mentorship
This mentorship is designed for writers who are ready to move beyond fragments, notes, and isolated scenes — and into a story that holds together.
It is a deeply supportive, private creative partnership for carrying your family history or memoir from defined structure into a coherent first draft, with care, clarity, and sustained guidance.
This is not a writing course.
It is not a quick fix.
It is a thoughtful, human, story-centered mentorship for writers who are committed to their story and ready to give it the time and attention it deserves.
It is not a quick fix.
It is a thoughtful, human, story-centered mentorship for writers who are committed to their story and ready to give it the time and attention it deserves.
Who This Mentorship Is For
This mentorship is for writers who:
- Have a clear story emerging and want to shape it into a manuscript
- Are working with Waypoints or another narrative framework
- Want guidance not only on what to write, but how the story holds together
- Are navigating emotionally layered material
- Want sustained support rather than isolated sessions
- Are ready to commit to a meaningful creative partnership
- Value structure, emotional honesty, and narrative integrity
This mentorship is especially well suited to writers working with family history, braided memoirs, and multi-generational narratives.
What Makes This Mentorship Different
Most writing support focuses either on:
- Craft in isolation
or - Motivation in isolation
This mentorship integrates both — while holding the entire story in view.
Here, we work on:
- Structure and story architecture
- Scenes and emotional movement
- Thematic coherence and braid balance
- Pacing across the whole manuscript
- Your relationship to the work itself
The result is not just pages — but a manuscript that feels purposeful, emotionally grounded, and narratively sound.
How We Work Together
1. Story Architecture & Waypoint Mapping
We begin by clarifying the backbone of your story.
Together, we will:
- Define and refine your Waypoints
- Clarify what changes emotionally at each stage
- Ensure your story moves forward with intention
- Align structure with the story you actually want to tell
This ensures your manuscript grows from a stable, meaningful foundation.
2. Scene Shaping & Narrative Momentum
For each Waypoint, we will:
- Identify the key scenes that belong there
- Clarify what each scene is doing emotionally and narratively
- Ensure scenes carry tension, movement, and purpose
- Prevent redundancy and narrative drift
You will no longer be “just writing scenes.”
You will be building a story.
You will be building a story.
3. Guided Drafting & Ongoing Feedback
As you draft, you will receive:
- Written guidance on scenes and story flow
- Structural and emotional feedback
- Support in recognizing what is working
- Direction on what to deepen and what to leave for later
This keeps your momentum steady while preventing over-revision or self-doubt.
4. Holding the Whole Story Between Sessions
Unlike session-based coaching, this mentorship includes:
- Active tracking of your manuscript arc
- Awareness of how Waypoints are connecting
- Continuity across your draft
- A mentor who remembers where you’ve been and where you’re going
So you are never carrying the story alone.
5. Emotional Containment for the Work
Writing family history and memoir is not just technical work — it is emotional work.
This mentorship provides space for:
- Navigating difficult material with care
- Working through resistance and fear
- Honoring the weight of inherited stories
- Staying connected to why this story matters to you
This is as much about how you write the story as what you write.
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This package includes
What’s Included
Each mentorship is customized, but typically includes:
- Regular private coaching sessions (75 minutes)
- Written Waypoint and scene plans
- Ongoing scene-level written feedback
- Manuscript-level guidance
- Strategic pacing and milestone planning
- Light support between sessions
- A clearly defined path toward a complete first draft
What This Mentorship Is Not
This mentorship does not include:
- Line editing
- Copyediting
- Proofreading
- Final language polish
Those belong to later phases of revision and refinement.
Here, we are building the story — not perfecting sentences.
Investment:
Custom proposal
(Typical range: $3,000–$4,000 USD depending on scope and duration)
(Typical range: $3,000–$4,000 USD depending on scope and duration)