Developmental Review — 5,001 to 10,000 Words
Story Feedback for a Substantial Section
Ideal for reviewing:
- A multi-scene sequence
- An early section of your book
- Or a key turning point in the narrative
You’ll Receive:
- Story-level feedback on structure and pacing
- Emotional coherence and depth guidance
- Notes on braid balance and narrative flow
- Clear recommendations for development
Price: $275 USD
Price
$250
This package includes
- No session time
- Submission form: “Reading Submission” with:
- Word count
- Link to doc
- Deadline preference (optional)
- 3 questions they want answered