Writing your law school personal statement doesn’t have to feel overwhelming. Most law school applicants don't struggle because they're bad writers. They struggle because they don't know what story to tell.
That's exactly what this package is designed to solve. With the right guidance, you can turn your unique story into a powerful essay that gets noticed by admissions committees.
That's exactly what this package is designed to solve. With the right guidance, you can turn your unique story into a powerful essay that gets noticed by admissions committees.
As a former law school admissions officer (from a TOP law school) and a licensed attorney and admissions coach, I’ve read thousands of application files and know exactly what makes an essay stand out.
This service combines strategy + execution so you can confidently submit an essay that reflects who you are and impresses the schools you’re applying to.
What’s Included
- Essay Brainstorming Session (Live Call)
We’ll spend time uncovering your story, identifying your strongest themes, and mapping out how to structure your essay so it’s authentic and compelling. - Essay Review
Once you’ve drafted your essay, I’ll provide a detailed review with line-by-line edits, structural feedback, and recommendations to strengthen your narrative. - Tailored Admissions Insight
Feedback is given through the lens of someone who has actually made admissions recommendations so you’ll know how your essay reads from the other side of the table.
Who This Is For
This session is perfect if you:
- Feel stuck on what to write about and need clarity on your story.
- Already drafted an essay but aren’t sure if it’s strong enough.
- Want insider-level feedback from someone who knows what admissions officers are really looking for.
- Are serious about submitting an application that stands out from the pile.
Why Work With Me?
- I’m the former Associate Director of Admissions for UCLA School of Law.
- I’ve helped hundreds of applicants strengthen their applications and secure over $25 million in scholarships.
- I understand the nuances of race-blind admissions and how to help applicants—especially those who are low-income, first-gen, or underrepresented—craft essays that highlight their strengths.
Investment
This package is more than just an essay edit, it’s a strategy-driven partnership to help you put your best self on paper.
✨ Your story deserves to be told powerfully. Let’s make it happen.
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Have a LSAC Fee Waiver? Click here to get a 50% off coupon code. Please note that this code can only be applied at checkout. If you purchase a service without using it, requests to apply it retroactively will not be honored.
Price
$200
OR
4 payments of $25 (every 2 weeks)
By booking this package, you agree to these Terms and Conditions
This package includes
- 1 x 45-minute call (via phone or zoom - your choice)
- 1 x Essay Review